The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided bar graph gives information about the proportion of gross domestic product from the IT and
service
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industry of the United Kingdom, between 1992 and 2000.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the IT industry was the most popular throughout the years in the UK,
while
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the production of the
service
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industry was the least common among the British.
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with, the amount of
service
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factory was the highest in Britain in 1992. It began at around 6.5 per cent in 1992 and witnessed a gradual decrease in 1996 to about eight per cent. The consumption experienced a dramatic increase from 1998 to 2000 with 12% and approximately 15% respectively.
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, consuming
service
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factories with the lowest compared with IT factories. It's at 4% in 1992.
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, they had a steady rise throughout the years, it reached almost 8.5% in 2000.
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