The graph shows data on the manufacture of passenger cars in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The pie chart depicts the data regarding the
production
of passenger
cars in 2015.
In 2015, Greater China and Europe dominated the percentage of world passenger
car
production
at 26% and 25%, respectively. This
is followed by North America and Japan or Korea at 19% and 16%, which number became the second highest in passenger
car
production
.
However
, in comparison with the other countries
, there were 3 countries
whose contributions were not too significant. South Asia, South America, and the Middle East or Africa only produced below 10% of the total passenger
cars manufactured in a row. Clearly, this
data showed insignificant growth in car
production
in those 3 countries
in 2015.
In conclusion, among the seven countries
, Greater China and Europe became the leading countries
that produced passenger
cars in 2015. On the contrary
side, South Asia, South America, and the Middle East or Africa were the least contributors to car
manufacturing.Submitted by kelly on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, passenger, car, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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