Semi-Formal Letter Prompt: "You recently attended a workshop and would like to thank the organizer. Write a letter to the organizer. In your letter, you should: 1.Express your gratitude for the workshop. 2.Describe what you learned or found valuable. 3.Suggest how the workshop could be improved."

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Dear Pritha, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to thank you for organizing

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a wonderful workshop on furniture making. I

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thoroughly enjoyed the process of wood cutting which I have never experienced in my life. Being an Interior Designer, designing furniture is a part of my work but getting

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hands-on experience was a great addition to my knowledge. I would

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like to thank Priya, your sub-ordinate as she made all the arrangements for me which helped me in settling for the class. There is a small suggestion that I would like to make. It would be an added advantage for people if you

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add the topic of sustainability in the workshop as it is the demand of the time and help designers to look for more sustainable

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in furniture making. Again, I would like to express my gratitude for a new experience, especially for budding designers like me. Yours sincerely, Bindiya Gupta

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea. The paragraph about thanking the organizer mixes expressions of gratitude and the description of the hands-on experience. Consider separating these for clarity.

task achievement

While the letter is very well written, providing a bit more detail on what specific skills or knowledge you gained from the workshop would enhance the completeness of your response.

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The overall tone of the letter is appropriately semi-formal and polite, which matches the context well.

coherence cohesion

The letter is logically structured, with a clear greeting, body, and closing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

162 words

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