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Semi-Formal Letter Prompt: "You recently attended a workshop and would like to thank the organizer. Write a letter to the organizer. In your letter, you should: 1.Express your gratitude for the workshop. 2.Describe what you learned or found valuable. 3.Suggest how the workshop could be improved."

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Dear Pritha, I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
 letter to thank you for organizing
such
 a wonderful workshop on furniture making. I
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 thoroughly enjoyed the process of wood cutting which I have never experienced in my life. Being an Interior Designer, designing furniture is a part of my work but getting
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hands-on experience was a great addition to my knowledge. I would
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 like to thank Priya, your sub-ordinate as she made all the arrangements for me which helped me in settling for the class. There is a small suggestion that I would like to make. It would be an added advantage for people if you
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 add the topic of sustainability in the workshop as it is the demand of the time and help designers to look for more sustainable
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 in furniture making. Again, I would like to express my gratitude for a new experience, especially for budding designers like me. Yours sincerely, Bindiya Gupta
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea. The paragraph about thanking the organizer mixes expressions of gratitude and the description of the hands-on experience. Consider separating these for clarity.
task achievement
While the letter is very well written, providing a bit more detail on what specific skills or knowledge you gained from the workshop would enhance the completeness of your response.
task achievement
The overall tone of the letter is appropriately semi-formal and polite, which matches the context well.
coherence cohesion
The letter is logically structured, with a clear greeting, body, and closing.
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