The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The maps given compare the Ryemouth village’s development from 1995 to
present
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moment.
Overall
, it can be seen that many features in the prior year
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been changed into new features or even demolished.
To begin
with, regarding
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the south
area
of the maps, there are many changes
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occurred, the five buildings on the west side that used to be shops
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turned into restaurants. Move to the opposite side of the shops, there are fish markets that
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transformed into apartments.
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there was a fishing port
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the south of the villages,
apparently
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it has been demolished
along with
the fish markets transformation.
Moreover
, the hotel and the cafe
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remain the same, except a car park has been added next to the hotel. Moving to the north
area
of the maps, it is obvious that the pathways
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been expanded to the west
area
to facilitate the development of the new houses
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the
area
. To the east, we no longer find the forest park with trees there, which
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been chopped down to make
a
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space for
tennis
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a tennis
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area
next to
golf
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the golf
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area
that used to be
a
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farmland before.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • village
  • Ryemouth
  • 1995
  • present
  • houses
  • small school
  • residential areas
  • amenities
  • population
  • increased
  • growth
  • expansion
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