The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The maps given compare the Ryemouth village’s development from 1995 to
present
moment. Correct article usage
the present
Overall
, it can be seen that many features in the prior year has
been changed into new features or even demolished.
Change the verb form
have
To begin
with, regarding with
the south Change preposition
apply
area
of the maps, there are many changes has
occurred, the five buildings on the west side that used to be shops Correct subject-verb agreement
have
has
turned into restaurants. Move to the opposite side of the shops, there are fish markets that Correct subject-verb agreement
have
has
transformed into apartments. Change the verb form
have
Additionally
there was a fishing port Add a comma
Additionally,
on
the south of the villages, Change preposition
in
apparently
it has been demolished Add a comma
apparently,
along with
the fish markets transformation. Moreover
, the hotel and the cafe are
remain the same, except a car park has been added next to the hotel.
Moving to the north Unnecessary verb
apply
area
of the maps, it is obvious that the pathways has
been expanded to the west Change the verb form
have
area
to facilitate the development of the new houses on
the Change preposition
in
area
. To the east, we no longer find the forest park with trees there, which has
been chopped down to make Correct subject-verb agreement
have
a
space for Remove the article
apply
tennis
Correct article usage
a tennis
area
next to golf
Correct article usage
the golf
area
that used to be a
farmland before.Remove the article
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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