The charts below show the main methods of transportation for people of one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting the main features and comparisons where relevant.
The charts describe the proportion
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of transportations
transportations
types which were used by people for working or studying in a university in 2004 and 2009.
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transportation
facts
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fact
these graph
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this graph
these graphs
are
that all methods of transport showed an upward Correct subject-verb agreement
is
users
except car
which experienced a downward trend.
Another interesting point is that Fix the agreement mistake
cars
bus
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buses
car
were the Fix the agreement mistake
cars
favorite
transport that was used in both periods.
Looking at the details, the number of bus and car Change the spelling
favourite
users
had the biggest portion than other transports. These stood at 33% and 51% in the first period then
bus passengers rose gradually approximately
13% in 2009 but people who used cars dropped dramatically with twice reduction to 26 % in 2009.
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by approximately
On the other hand
, the walking and train users
were not as high as bicycle passengers who had almost 10% compared to walking and train transport had just under 5% in 2004 then
these transportations got rising the maximun
around 2% in 2009. Correct your spelling
maximum
Whereas
bicycle users
increased about 16% in 2009.Submitted by k a l l a on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words users with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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