The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
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The bar graph displays the data collected in a survey about the
coffee
and tea buying and drinking habits of
residents
in five
cities
in Australia in the
last
four weeks.
Overall
, in all the
cities
except
Adelaide
, more people went to a cafe for
coffee
or tea than bought instant or fresh
coffee
. In
Adelaide
, going to a cafe and buying instant
coffee
were almost equally common. Most
residents
in Melbourne, Hobart, Sydney, and Brisbane visited a cafe for
coffee
or tea, at approximately 64%, 63%, 62%, and 55% respectively,
whereas
just under half of
residents
in
Adelaide
did so. These five
cities
also
had roughly half of
residents
purchasing instant
coffee
, and the figures in Hobart and Brisbane were almost 55%. In comparison, the proportion of people who bought fresh
coffee
was never as high as 45% in any of the five
cities
, with those in Brisbane and
Adelaide
, both at nearly 35%, less likely than those in the other three
cities
to do so.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, residents, cities, adelaide with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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