The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart compares the differences between the maximum
number
of
elephants
in nine Asian countries
in
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1997 to 2004. In brief, in comparison to 1997, elephant populations across these countries declined in 2004, with the exception of Cambodia and Laos. Notably, India has consistently maintained the highest
number
of
elephants
in both years. Turning to detail, starting with right below 10000
elephants
in 1997, India lost almost 2,500 species, which left an estimated population of only 7,500.
Similarly
, Thailand and Malaysia saw a steeper decline in elephant populations. Their numbers dropped to roughly one-third of what they were in 1997, from almost 4000 to 1000 and 3000 to 1000, respectively. Sri Lanka and Myanmar
also
saw a slight decrease of less than 500 species in their elephant populations in 2004, compared to 1997.
Conversely
, Cambodia saw a rise of about 100
elephants
in 2004,
while
Laos stood at the same
number
as its in 1997. Vietnam and China, which contributed the least
elephants
in 9 countries,
also
experienced a minor loss in their
number
of
elephants
.
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  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trend
  • decline
  • increase
  • decrease
  • population
  • significant
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  • data
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  • notable
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