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In today’s job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent times , the companies who are hiring often look at the priorities of
skills
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 rather than a particular degree in certain .
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 , I completely disagree with the statement , that in the future job seekers will not need a formal educational
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 for
jobs
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 . In
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 is required for any kind of complex sector except labour ,and touch on both arguments. On the one hand, sectors like cleaning, waitress and others in which a particular certificate is not necessary to get the
jobs
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, but ,nowadays , big information and technology companies started to give opportunities to work with only
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the individuals who are perfect in their skillset .
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, Tesla is a multibillion-dollar electrical motor company ,and
last
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 recruitment for certain posts many
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 selected who are masters in coding by passing coding round interviews, the interesting thing is they do not have degrees in the computer science field .
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,by
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 trend,in the near future, a person with experience and a skillset often will be in the first place rather than a
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 without
skills
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 .
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 ,
people
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 who went to colleges and universities are still in
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first place ,because
people
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 who gave their 4 to 6 years in an institute learn particular
skills
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 and mark their performance which makes hiring person
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to know about histories and knowledge level.
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 ,
people
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 who have qualifications like MBBS in nursing only get
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 in hospitals ,
skills
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 are like myths in
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 the senior doctors or tutors . Not only medical and surgical fields , getting into the teaching field and experimental
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 needs
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 . In conclusion ,it appears that individuals with degrees have strong points as most medical and experimental fields first see
qualification
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 .
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 ,
jobs
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 in which
skills
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 like cleaning do not require
qualification
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.

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Clarify your thesis statement in the introduction to make your argument more direct. Avoid ambiguous statements that may confuse readers about your position on the topic.
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Support your main points with more detailed examples and explanations. This will strengthen your argument and make your essay more convincing.
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