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The pie charts below show usage share of desktop browsers in 2019 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show usage share of desktop browsers in 2019 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the percentage (%)
use
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 of five different browsers in 2019 in 2021. An initial analysis reveals there was a minimum variation of every browser
use
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 between the
years
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 analyzed. Chrome was the highest desktop browser usage in both 2019 and 2021, with approximately two-thirds of
overall
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use
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, exhibiting just a
slightly
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slight
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 decrease of 2% throughout the
years
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.
Moreover
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, the least applied internet searching in 2019 was Edge with 5%,
however
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, it experienced a modest increase to 9% in 2021, reaching
the
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apply
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third place
at
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this
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 year.
Similarly
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, the other browsers accounted
a
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for a
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minimum variation between the
years
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, with Safari´s percentage increasing only 1%, Firefox declining by the same value, and "
others
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other
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 browsers" exhibiting a slump of 2% throughout the
years
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 analyzed.
Overall
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, Chrome led the percentage of
internet-searchers
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internet searchers
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use
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to use
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 in both
years
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, and every other browser experienced a modest change from 2019 to 2021.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words use, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "modest" was used 2 times.
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