The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the average
changes
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of
Change preposition
in
prices
of copper, nickel and zinc every month in the year 2014. Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the monthly changing Linking Words
prices
of all three metals majorly decreased during the first semester, remained unchanged from July to September but tended to Use synonyms
increase
by the end of the year.
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According to
the data, the average changing Linking Words
price
of nickel experienced the most dramatic decline compared to the remaining metal Use synonyms
prices
in the first six months. After increasing by 6% in January, the Use synonyms
price
change dropped significantly to negative 3% in June. Use synonyms
However
, the average Linking Words
changes
in Use synonyms
price
climbed up to negative 1% in July and it remained stable during the third quarter. The average Use synonyms
price
Use synonyms
changes
ended by an Use synonyms
increase
of 1% Use synonyms
at the end
of the year.
The average Linking Words
prices
of copper and zinc showed a similar pattern. Use synonyms
Although
both average Linking Words
prices
experienced an Use synonyms
increase
Use synonyms
by
2% and 1% at the outset of the period, Change preposition
of
it
declined to negative 0.5% and negative 1% in June. Correct pronoun usage
they
However
, the average Linking Words
price
Use synonyms
changes
managed to rise by 1% Use synonyms
increase
and negative 0.5% in July and similar to nickel, the Use synonyms
Use synonyms
prices
change remained the same until the end of September. In December, the average Change the noun form
price
prices
increased by 1.5% Use synonyms
and1
%, respectively.Correct your spelling
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words changes, prices, increase, price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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