The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the average
changes
of
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in
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prices
of copper, nickel and zinc every month in the year 2014.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the monthly changing
prices
of all three metals majorly decreased during the first semester, remained unchanged from July to September but tended to
increase
by the end of the year.
According to
the data, the average changing
price
of nickel experienced the most dramatic decline compared to the remaining metal
prices
in the first six months. After increasing by 6% in January, the
price
change dropped significantly to negative 3% in June.
However
, the average
changes
in
price
climbed up to negative 1% in July and it remained stable during the third quarter. The average
price
changes
ended by an
increase
of 1%
at the end
of the year. The average
prices
of copper and zinc showed a similar pattern.
Although
both average
prices
experienced an
increase
by
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of
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2% and 1% at the outset of the period,
it
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they
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declined to negative 0.5% and negative 1% in June.
However
, the average
price
changes
managed to rise by 1%
increase
and negative 0.5% in July and similar to nickel, the
prices
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price
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change remained the same until the end of September. In December, the average
prices
increased by 1.5%
and1
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and 1
%, respectively.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words changes, prices, increase, price with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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