The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the average
changes
of
Change preposition
in
prices
of copper, nickel and zinc every month in the year 2014. Overall
, it is clear that
the monthly changing prices
of all three metals majorly decreased during the first semester, remained unchanged from July to September but tended to increase
by the end of the year.
According to
the data, the average changing price
of nickel experienced the most dramatic decline compared to the remaining metal prices
in the first six months. After increasing by 6% in January, the price
change dropped significantly to negative 3% in June. However
, the average changes
in price
climbed up to negative 1% in July and it remained stable during the third quarter. The average price
changes
ended by an increase
of 1% at the end
of the year.
The average prices
of copper and zinc showed a similar pattern. Although
both average prices
experienced an increase
by
2% and 1% at the outset of the period, Change preposition
of
it
declined to negative 0.5% and negative 1% in June. Correct pronoun usage
they
However
, the average price
changes
managed to rise by 1% increase
and negative 0.5% in July and similar to nickel, the prices
change remained the same until the end of September. In December, the average Change the noun form
price
prices
increased by 1.5% and1
%, respectively.Correct your spelling
and 1
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words changes, prices, increase, price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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