You are being sent on a one month work assignment in San Francisco, California. You need a place to stay while you are there. Write a letter to the Maury Samson Real Estate Agency. In your letter: explain the situation describe the kind of accommodation you would like provide the dates you will need it

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Dear Sir/Mam, I hope you are doing great. I am Sathish Raghumani writing

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letter to request a stay for my temporary work visit to San Francisco, CA. I am travelling on my business trip with my colleague for

one month

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assignment. I would like to block a

two bedroom

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two-bedroom

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apartment with the office space. I want a fully furnished bedroom with

mattress

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and a comforter,

separate

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attached bathroom with

dressing

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room should be provided. One Washing and the dryer would be helpful for both of us. I like to have

fully

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equipped kitchen including the fridge, OTG with a gas top and a dishwasher.

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we would like to have a griller station in our backyard to have some fun on weekends. We will be travelling on 25h July 2024 and planning to extend our stay till 29th August 2024. Please feel free to

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+1 (470)918 7782 for any clarifications. As we have only a week for our business trip I would appreciate your immediate action

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matter. Thank you and looking forward to hearing from you. Your's Faithfully Sathish Raghumani

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grammar

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clarity

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task achievement

The letter covers all necessary information clearly and comprehensively.

writing tone

The tone is appropriate and professional for a business correspondence.

structure

The letter is logically structured, with each paragraph addressing a specific aspect of the request.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

186 words

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