The chart below shows the results of a survey about peoples coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart depicts the number of
people
in five Australian cities about the habits of buying coffee
and tea
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in Melbourne with Hobart in the second city the
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saw that the Brisbane and Adelaide have the
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people
in Adelaide have similar
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people
drink instant coffee
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or tea
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4 weeks
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