Your neighbour keeps an animal in his / her garden and that is causing problem for you. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: say what the problem is and how it is affecting you suggest how the problem could be solved tell your neighbour what action you might take if the problem is not solved
Dear Mr. Mehta,
I am writing
this
letter to express my concerns caused due to
your pet dogs
.
To begin
with, please note that your pet dogs
play every evening in the garden. They continued to play for more than 3 hours and continuously barked at people who passed by.the area. As a result
, it's causing too much noise pollution and irritation for my family. Since I am a high blood pressure patient, I can not tolerate every day this
activity.
Therefore
, I would request you to take your dogs
for a long walk in common ground areas where people's movement is very low and your dogs
can also
play wisely. Moreover
, you may try to keep them with other pets dogs
in the garden to make them more generous to everyone.
However
, if you can't stop your dog from barking noise, then
, I will complain to the Municipal corporation to take the dogs
to a rehabilitation centre.
I am looking forward to your support and cooperation.
Yours sincerely,
Rob Steve,Submitted by ahv on
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