IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 8

Your neighbour keeps an animal in his / her garden and that is causing problem for you. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: say what the problem is and how it is affecting you suggest how the problem could be solved tell your neighbour what action you might take if the problem is not solved

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Dear Mr. Mehta, I am writing
this
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 letter to express my concerns caused
due to
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 your pet
dogs
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.
To begin
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 with, please note that your pet
dogs
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 play every evening in the garden. They continued to play for more than 3 hours and continuously barked at people who passed by.the area.
As a result
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, it's causing too much noise pollution and irritation for my family. Since I am a high blood pressure patient, I can not tolerate every day
this
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 activity.
Therefore
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, I would request you to take your
dogs
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 for a long walk in common ground areas where people's movement is very low and your
dogs
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 can
also
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 play wisely.
Moreover
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, you may try to keep them with other pets
dogs
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 in the garden to make them more generous to everyone.
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, if you can't stop your dog from barking noise,
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, I will complain to the Municipal corporation to take the
dogs
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 to a rehabilitation centre. I am looking forward to your support and cooperation. Yours sincerely, Rob Steve,

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Coherence and Cohesion
To improve coherence, consider breaking down the larger paragraphs into smaller ones to address each idea separately.
Task Achievement
To achieve a higher score, ensure the tone is consistently polite and formal throughout the letter.
Task Achievement
The letter provides a clear and complete response to the task requirements.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and formal, fitting the context of the letter.
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