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The presented table gives information about costs of the projects in the future five year period in American dollars for three environmental project for sustainable foresty.The supplied pie chart illustrates the expected expediture breakdown allocation for the next five year as the projects are set up.

The presented table gives information about costs of the projects in the future five year period in American dollars for three environmental project for sustainable foresty.The supplied pie chart illustrates the expected expediture breakdown allocation for the next five year as the projects are set up.
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The given table compares the predicted budgets for environmentally friendly schemes in three places for sustainable woody land in the next five years. Unit measures in millions of American dollars. The presented pie chart illustrates how the
money
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 will be spent in the first
year
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 by the percentage of 4 categories.
Overall
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, it is obvious that the amount of
money
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 that will be put into
environmentally
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environmental
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 projects has a simple trend, which means,
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that Sout-east
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Sout-east
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Southeast
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 Asia, Central America and West Africa will be invested more rational each other each
year
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 respectively.
South-east
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Southeast
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 Asia will have more
money
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 than others every
year
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 and
also
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,
it
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and it
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 will increase that
year
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 by
year
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, except from the first
year
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 to the second
year
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, to reach 50 in
Year
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 5. Meanwhile, a decrease in
money
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 will be felt by the other 2 regions 2 years in a row and they must continue for other three years with the fixed and lowest wealth (3.5 for West Africa and 5 for Central America);
however
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, they will have far more than that for the first
year
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 as 20 and a half more than 10 respectively. Regarding the pie chart, in
first-
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the first
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year
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year
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 staff will be paid
with
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apply
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exactly half of the whole budget for the project for
this
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year
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. Other same remained budget must cover
expenditure
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the expenditure
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of
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on
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 Training by 10 and the same for Office expenses, whilst in the middle, Set-up costs will be three of ten of
this
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year
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's
money
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable forestry
  • environmental projects
  • expenditure breakdown
  • allocation
  • trends
  • fiscal forecasting
  • comparative analysis
  • long-term benefits
  • investment
  • funding sources
  • discrepancy
  • research and development
  • educational initiatives
  • planting strategies
  • financial requirements
  • impact assessment
  • cost analysis
  • project viability
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