The diagram below shows the process of producing yogurt in a factory. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram describes how the factories produce
yoghurt
.
Overall
, to produce
Change the verb form
producing
yoghurt
takes 7 stages starting with boiling to transport to the stores.
According to
the diagram, the process of production starts with boiling milk
to 90C for 30 minutes. It is lucid
that if the pasteurization of Correct word choice
clear
milk
takes more than 30 min, it will become thicker yoghurt
.
The next stage is cooling the milk
from 90C to 44C and it helps to add more items to milk
. After that live bacteria cultures, which play an important role in the process, are added to the milk
. It is interesting to note that the fourth stage of preparation of yoghurt
takes 4 hours. After
this
process, yoghurt
is put in the refrigerator to cool the product. Additional ingredients such
as sugar and fruits will be added to make a
product better. In the final stage, the Correct article usage
the
yoghurt
is poured in
special cups and Change preposition
into
is
is sold for distribution.Unnecessary verb
apply
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words yoghurt, milk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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