The diagram below shows the process of producing yogurt in a factory. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the process of producing yogurt in a factory.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The diagram describes how the factories produce
yoghurt
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.
Overall
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,
to produce
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producing
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yoghurt
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takes 7 stages starting with boiling to transport to the stores.
According to
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the diagram, the process of production starts with boiling
milk
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to 90C for 30 minutes. It is
lucid
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clear
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that if the pasteurization of
milk
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takes more than 30 min, it will become thicker
yoghurt
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. The next stage is cooling the
milk
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from 90C to 44C and it helps to add more items to
milk
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. After that live bacteria cultures, which play an important role in the process, are added to the
milk
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. It is interesting to note that the fourth stage of preparation of
yoghurt
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takes 4 hours.
After
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this
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process,
yoghurt
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is put in the refrigerator to cool the product. Additional ingredients
such
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as sugar and fruits will be added to make
a
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the
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product better. In the final stage, the
yoghurt
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is poured
in
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into
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special cups and
is
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apply
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is sold for distribution.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words yoghurt, milk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pasteurization
  • fermentation
  • bacterial cultures
  • incubation
  • optimal temperature
  • thickens
  • distinctive texture
  • cooled
  • additional ingredients
  • packaged
  • sealed
  • distribution
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