The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram displays the floor structure of a public library 20 years ago and now. Looking from an

overall

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perspective,

it is clear that

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what stands out from the map is that it has become more modern and developed.

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, one of the changes is that tables and chairs from the middle of the library have been removed and at present it is an empty area. On the right-hand side of the diagram, there has been an equity desk from where people could buy tickets and return

books

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, but now there is a cafe.

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of the lecture

room

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, 20 years ago there was a children’s book selection. In the past, between the children's book

room

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and equity desks there was just an adult non-fiction

books

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section,

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now there are adult fiction

books

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, an information desk and self-service machines.

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, on the northwest side of the

library

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there were CDs, videos and computer games archives but that

room

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was extended and at the moment there are two sofas, the children’s fiction selection and a special place for storytelling events.

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the computer games area, the adult fiction

books

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were removed and replaced with all reference

books

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Finally

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, the reading

room

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with newspapers and magazines was demolished and a computer

room

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was built.

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

floor plan
public library
layout
reading area
computer station
multimedia section
children's area
reference section
study cubicles
shelving units
digital media
technological advancements
user behavior
accessibility
traffic flow
modernization
community needs
conversion
allocation
removal

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