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The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, A,erican, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, A,erican, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
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The bar chart depicts the average number of
hours
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 per
day
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tourists
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 from different countries spent on leisure activities in Greece in August 2019. The
tourists
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 are categorized by nationality:
Chinese
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,
American
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,
Turkish
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, and
Brazilian
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.
Overall
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, reading books was the most popular
activity
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 among
Chinese
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 and
American
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tourists
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,
while
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 going to the beach was the most
favored
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activity
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 for
Turkish
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 and
Brazilian
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tourists
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. Visiting places was the least popular
activity
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 for
Chinese
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tourists
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, with other nationalities
also
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 spending less time on
this
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activity
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 compared to reading and beach activities.
Chinese
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tourists
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 spent the most time reading books, with an average of 8
hours
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 per
day
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,
while
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American
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tourists
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 spent 5
hours
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 per
day
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 on
this
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activity
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.
In contrast
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,
Turkish
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 and
Brazilian
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tourists
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 spent the most time at the beach, with
Turkish
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tourists
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 averaging 5
hours
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 and
Brazilian
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tourists
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 6
hours
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 per
day
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. Visiting places was the least popular
activity
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 among
Chinese
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tourists
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, who only spent 1 hour per
day
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 on it.
American
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 and
Turkish
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tourists
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 spent 3
hours
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 per
day
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 visiting places,
while
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Brazilian
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tourists
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 spent 2
hours
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 per
day
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 65%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, day, tourists, chinese, american, turkish, brazilian, activity with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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