The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, A,erican, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

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The bar chart depicts the average number of

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per

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tourists

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from different countries spent on leisure activities in Greece in August 2019. The

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are categorized by nationality:

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, and

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, reading books was the most popular

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among

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and

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tourists

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while

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going to the beach was the most

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activity

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for

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and

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tourists

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. Visiting places was the least popular

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for

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, with other nationalities

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spending less time on

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compared to reading and beach activities.

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spent the most time reading books, with an average of 8

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American

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spent 5

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and

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spent the most time at the beach, with

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averaging 5

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and

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tourists

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per

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. Visiting places was the least popular

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among

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, who only spent 1 hour per

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on it.

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spent 3

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visiting places,

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, A,erican, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

Obesity is an ever-growing pandemic that is affecting more and more of the world’s population. The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth of overweight people in society? How can this issue be resolved?

Nowadays, more and more children are being brought up in single parent families. What are the causes of this? What effects can be seen as a result of this?

Compared to the past, more people are now studying abroad because it is more convenient and cheaper than before. Do you think this is beneficial to the foreign student’s home country? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Some people think that sport teacheas chealdren how to compete,while others believe that children learn team work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Over the last few decades, the media has promoted the image of young thin women as being ideal. what problem has this caused? what solution can you suggest to this issue?