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IELTS Essay Task 1: Transport Preferences Among Young People The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. IELTS Essay Task 1: Transport Preferences Among Young People The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Essay Task 1: Transport Preferences Among Young People The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. IELTS Essay Task 1: Transport Preferences Among Young People The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided bar graph gives information about the favourite transportation among young individuals including
cars
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, motorcycles and bicycles
in particular
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 countries
such
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 as the UK, the USA,
France
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 and Italy.
Overall
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, it can be shown that the most used vehicle was
cars
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. Italy had the greatest number of young who used
cars
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. Motorcycles experienced fluctuations in the four countries.
To begin
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 with, the highest used transportation was
cars
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. Italy recorded the greatest number approximately 75%. Followed by the United States of America and the United Kingdom 60% respectively. Meanwhile,
France
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 witnessed the lowest number among the countries 40%.
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, using bicycles among teenagers accounted for the second rank which was the greatest in
France
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 with almost 45 per cent
while
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 the United States of America had the tiniest with 10%.
On the other hand
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, riding motorcycles among young was not popular. it can be seen that America had the large ratio with 30%,
while
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 British,
France
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 and Italian did not prefer it at 10% and nearly 8%
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, france with synonyms.
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