The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of the two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

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The pie charts illustrate the nutritional facts of the two

dinners

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menu. In general, it is shown that the most macro-

nutrients

contained in

medium baked

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medium-baked

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potato

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potatoes

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are

carbohydrate

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carbohydrates

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and protein.

While most

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Most

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nutrients

in macaroni are

carbohydrate

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carbohydrates

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and saturated fat. It is apparent from the chart that the percentage of

carbohydrate

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carbohydrates

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in macaroni is highest, at 52%.

In addition

, the second is saturated fat is 21%.

While

the other

nutrients

are

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have

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relatively lower percentages.

On the contrary

, medium baked potato has higher

nutrients

carbohydrate

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carbohydrates

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and protein.

However

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they still contain a higher percentage of

carbohydrate

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carbohydrates

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in medium baked

potato

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potatoes

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by 35%. Fascinatingly, the proportion of the protein is a quarter of the whole ingredients. The other

nutrients

are relatively

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apply

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small percentages.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words carbohydrate, nutrients with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

123 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

nutritional consistency
carbohydrates
proteins
fats
vitamins
minerals
fiber
proportion
component
pie graph
comparison
significant
balance
healthy
dietary choices
implications
absent
presence
macro-nutrients
micro-nutrients

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In some countries, some school leavers choose to work or travel for a year between finishing secondary school and attending university.

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