Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees this is beneficial. To what extent is globalisation a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Currently, Even though our world

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considered to be in

globalized

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a globalized

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era, which I really agree too, people still debate about

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there more advantages or disadvantages

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, I think

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are beneficial to people more. I accept that now we live in

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world as we can obviously see when we travel to

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, we not only see local cuisine but

also

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variety of international

food

for example

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Italian

food

that now can be adapted and

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with

many

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cultural

food

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foods

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around the world

such

as spaghetti which can mix with

Thai

food

to be Tom-yum spaghetti or with Chinese

food

known as mala spaghetti. I believe

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is a small thing but strong

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for

globalization

. On the one hand,

globalization

has many benefits for us in various

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. One of

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outstanding

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that

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in terms of economics and societal culture. Global connectivity facilitates various social roles, including trade, contractual agreements, and services

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to the driving of economies.

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food

industry

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cuisines from every corner of the globe traverse borders.

Thai

cuisine,

for example

, is found globally unexcepted

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which

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the upside down.

Moreover

,

this

inspire

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cultural fusion, elevating the diversity and value of

food

, which in turn impacts the quality of life, society, and cultural change in

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efficient way.

On the other hand

,

globalization

also

has drawbacks

due to

the result

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“Loss of culture”.

According to

Thai

culture in the past, we often wore traditional

thai

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outfits like sabai or ate

food

with our hands.

However

, in the current era influenced by jeans,

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and

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from

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causing

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those traditions

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. In summary,

globalization

has both negatives and positives but I consider it to give us benefits

over

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since

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we can

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in

way

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that the culture is not lost but just

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or

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with each other in order for the country to be

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and develop even more.