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The charts below show changes in student enrolment by degree at a university in Canada in 1980 and 2000.

The charts below show changes in student enrolment by degree at a university in Canada in 1980 and 2000.
#show #changes #student #enrolment #university #canada
The two pie charts show
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how students’
enrolment
 by
degree
 changed at a university in Canada in 1980 and 2000. One notable observation is the significant prevalence of Bachelor’s
degree
, with reaching 76% in 1980.
This
 was followed by
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an Associated
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Associated
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degree
 (13%), Master’s
degree
 (9%), and doctoral
degree
 (2%). These figures demonstrate that the variety of
enrolment
 of students was not seen in 1980.
However
, in 2000, the trend was substantially changed.
While
 students’
enrolment
 in
Bachelors’
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Bachelor’
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degree
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degrees
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 decreased dramatically, students’
enrolment
 in other degrees surged. The percentage of
enrolment
 in Bachelor’s
degree
 halved by 42%, but the proportion of
enrolment
 in Master’s
degree
 almost quadrupled by 35%.
In addition
, the percentage of
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degree
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degrees
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 increased to 18% and those of doctoral
degree
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degrees
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 over doubled, with a figure of 5%.
To sum up
,
it is clear that
 the Bachelor’s
degree
 experienced a striking decline in
enrolment
 in 2000,
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while other
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 types of degrees including Master’s
degree
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degrees
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, Associate
degree
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degrees
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, and Doctoral
degree
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degrees
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 soared, making
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more diversity in
students
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student
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enrolment
 at
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university
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universities
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 in Canada.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words enrolment, degree with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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