In our modern society, some individuals believe that plants and animals that are endangered or extinct are the main cause of environmental problems. While others argue that there are more environmental issues of paramount importance. In my opinion, I will

In our modern society, some individuals believe that

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that are endangered or extinct are the main cause of environmental

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others argue that there are more environmental issues of paramount importance. In my opinion, I will On the one hand, the

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of

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is one of the main causes of environmental

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and leads to a number of detrimental effects. Around the world,

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cut down trees in order to build buildings or even industrial parks, so there will not be enough trees to support individuals in producing oxygen and preventing flood flow.

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,

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that are on the brink of extinction are still hunted by

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to serve their needs.

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, humans kill tigers because they want to take their skin and make items

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as wallets,

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,

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do not know that killing tigers not only brings them to extinction earlier but

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makes it hard to control the population of ecosystems because tigers are predators and they help to balance the population of species.

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, there are a lot of

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that we need to tackle, not just the

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of

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. Those issues, which include pollution and climate change, are the main factors that cause environmental

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and the

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of habitats. Take water pollution as an example,

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tend to throw trash into the river, or even the sea.

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will not only affect the whole aquatic environment

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but

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pollute the water sources, so more and more

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around the world will not have clear water to serve their personal needs. As regards climate change, some

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,

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as melting ice, will lead to an increase in sea level and make several cities flood. In conclusion,

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I accept the view of

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who argue that the main

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that lead to environmental

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are the

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of

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and

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, I still believe that there are plenty of other

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that we need to notice.