The bar charts below show precipitation in hot desert climate grasslands in 1980 and 2000.

The bar charts below show precipitation in hot desert climate grasslands in 1980 and 2000.
The bar charts give information about the hot desert climate grasslands
precipitation
rate between 1980 and 2000 yearly. Units are measured in millimetres (
mm
).
Overall
, the
precipitation
in the desert fluctuated over the year for both periods given. Meanwhile, there was a huge decline in the average
precipitation
in 2000 compared to the year 1980. In 1980, the highest
precipitation
level
is on March was around 325
mm
and the
precipitation
significantly decreased in June was about 160
mm
which is the lowest
level
of
the
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1980 year and steadily increased in the
last
5 months. Meanwhile, in 2000 March and April were the lowest
precipitation
levels were at 47
mm
which are huge decline compared to the same period in 1980.
Also
, the
precipitation
level
of June in 2000 was at 53
mm
which is the highest
level
also
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as August was at 53
mm
compared to June and August in 1980.
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