You accidentally left an item of clothing at your friend’s house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: · describe the item of clothing · explain where you left it · say what you would like your friend to do with the item of clothing

Dear Jude, I'

writing to let you know that I left a T-shirt at your place

last

night. It's a red-coloured full-sleeve Manchester United jersey with Ronaldo's name printed on the back. It's a 2008 Moscow, Champions League Final match edition jersey and the size is XL. As far as I can remember, I kept it inside the master bedroom's wardrobe

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the third compartment from the bottom. It should be there somewhere

along with

your old clothes. If you've not yet given those garments for laundry, I'

certain the jersey's still there. Now that I'

moving to a different country, I really won't have much time to come and collect, I don't even want to.

Moreover

, I'd really like it if you could keep it, and give it to your brother, Rob. Like me he's

also

a big Ronaldo fan, I'

sure he'll love it. Looking forward to hearing back from you. Best wishes, Nilesh

Submitted by majumdarnilesh21 on Wed Sep 18 2024

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1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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8 paragraphs

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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