Write a letter to a translation agency about a report that you need to have translated urgently. Include -The content of your report -Why you need it translated -Why it is urgent

#translation #agency #report #-the #content #-why

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Respected sir/madam, I would like to inform you that,

iam

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I am

working in Kuwait as a nurse.

Due to

some health issues,I

wants

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to email a report.Which I

needs

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need

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to translate in Arabic.

Firstly

,the report includes that, I had

accident

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an accident

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on 10th of July 2024 and had severe head

injurry

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injury

injuries

.I was admitted

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the ICU under observation for one week.Recently,the doctor was advised

complete

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to complete

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bedrest

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bed rest

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for two

month

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months

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Moreover

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Moreover,

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wants

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want

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to take antibiotics for one month.So

iam

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I am

not fit for

continuing

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a continuing

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job

Secondly

,I came for 15 days vacation and I

wants

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to extend the leave for one month.

Otherwise

,they will terminate me from the

job

.Once I lost my

job

,it

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difficult for me to get a new

job

Thirdly

,the staff who is sitting in the office is Arabic staff,they are familiar with

Arabic

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the Arabic

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language only.So I need to translate

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the Malyalam

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Malyalam

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Malayalam

language

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into

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Arabic

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the Arabic

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language. Hope you can understand my current situation and kindly give me a reply. Yours faithfully Saniya Sunny

Submitted by saniyasunny1848 on Sun Jul 14 2024

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task achievement

Your letter is largely clear and addresses all necessary points. However, ensure to use proper punctuation and avoid run-on sentences.

coherence cohesion

Try to separate different ideas into distinct paragraphs to improve readability.

task achievement

You have appropriately included all required elements: the content of the report, the reason for translation, and the urgency.

coherence cohesion

Your greeting and closing are polite and suitable for a formal letter.

6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

157 words

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Write a letter to a translation agency about a report that you need to have translated urgently. Include -The content of your report -Why you need it translated -Why it is urgent

In many countries, the number of people suffering from stress is increasing. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to tackle it? #countries #people #stress #measures

In many government like to spend more money on the arts. Some people agree with this. However some think government should spend more on health and education. Discuss both side and give your opinion.

With the rapid growth of artificial intelligence, in the near future companies will begin reducing the number of employees working for them and use AI to get jobs done instead, eventually leading to massive unemployment worldwide.

Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Other believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature discuss both views and give your own opinion.