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Write a letter to a translation agency about a report that you need to have translated urgently. Include -The content of your report -Why you need it translated -Why it is urgent

#translation #agency #report #-the #content #-why
Respected sir/madam, I would like to inform you that,
iam
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I am
 working in Kuwait as a nurse.
Due to
 some health issues,I
wants
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 to email a report.Which I
needs
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need
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 to translate in Arabic.
Firstly
,the report includes that, I had
accident
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an accident
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 on 10th of July 2024 and had severe head
injurry
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injury
injuries
.I was admitted
in
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to
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 the ICU under observation for one week.Recently,the doctor was advised
complete
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to complete
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bedrest
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bed rest
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 for two
month
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months
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.
Moreover
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 I
wants
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 to take antibiotics for one month.So
iam
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I am
 not fit for
continuing
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job
.
Secondly
,I came for 15 days vacation and I
wants
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 to extend the leave for one month.
Otherwise
,they will terminate me from the
job
.Once I lost my
job
,it
is
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was
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 difficult for me to get a new
job
.
Thirdly
,the staff who is sitting in the office is Arabic staff,they are familiar with
Arabic
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the Arabic
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 language only.So I need to translate
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the Malyalam
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Malyalam
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Malayalam
 language
to
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into
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Arabic
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the Arabic
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 language. Hope you can understand my current situation and kindly give me a reply. Yours faithfully Saniya Sunny
Submitted by saniyasunny1848 on

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task achievement
Your letter is largely clear and addresses all necessary points. However, ensure to use proper punctuation and avoid run-on sentences.
coherence cohesion
Try to separate different ideas into distinct paragraphs to improve readability.
task achievement
You have appropriately included all required elements: the content of the report, the reason for translation, and the urgency.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are polite and suitable for a formal letter.
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