The relatively recent development of games on phones, computers, and TV consoles is extremely popular with people all over the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such electronic games?
Nowadays, the gaming industry is exorbitantly increasing. Many
people
believe that,
the trend of playing Remove the comma
apply
games
on technology like mobile phones, desktops, and playstations
Correct your spelling
PlayStations
have
positive effects. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
This
essay will discuss both perspectives and argue that, despite some benefits, the disadvantages of accessing games
on screen
outweigh their advantages.
Add a hyphen
on-screen
Initially
, the foremost drawback the online games
play is the increment of the screentime. People
of all ages spend hours playing these games
. The games
are designed in a way to get people
addicted and increases
dopamine Change the verb form
increase
due to
which people
lose the
track of time and Correct article usage
apply
ditatch
themselves from the outside world. A study was conducted in Ohio that showcased the Correct your spelling
detach
ditch
comparision
between Correct your spelling
comparison
people
playing online games
frequently and the people
who played rarely. It was evident from the study that the frequent players faced problems
in communicating face to face, gained weight, have
more Wrong verb form
had
eye sight
issues and high Correct your spelling
eyesight
level
of mental Fix the agreement mistake
levels
problems
including anxiety and depression. In addition
to this
, some games
endow violance
. Correct your spelling
violence
People
playing this
genre of games
show aggressive and anger problems
.
On the other hand
, the prime advantage of playing internet games
can be reflected in the pedagogical side. What I mean by this
is children can learn and enhance their critical thinking and problems solving
skills by playing. Correct your spelling
problem-solving
For example
, Starcast is an online game based on the developing
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development
a
city where the player has to build his own township. There are various levels and as the game progresses the difficulty level rises. Change preposition
of a
Other
advantage is, Change the wording
Another
with
Correct word choice
that with
games
like Fifa, people
from different time zones can be connected and bond.
In conclusion, while
some Correct word choice
apply
people
can be benefitted
from playing Wrong verb form
benefit
games
online by making friends from around the world or by learning various skills. The counterarguments like withdrawl
from relations, depression, and health Correct your spelling
withdrawal
problems
are more imperative.Submitted by assudanikanchan1 on
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