The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Spending in Thousand Pound Sterling

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Spending in Thousand Pound Sterling
The bar graph illustrates the number of spent on six kinds of goods (photographic film , toys , CDs, perfumes,
tennis
racquets
, and personal stereos) in four nations (Britain, France, Italy, and Germany).
Overall
, Britain has the highest
amount
of spending
especially
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, especially
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on photographic film goods.
while
German people spend the lowest
amount
of spent on CDs. The highest
amount
of spending for different nations , The UK people spent
in
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on
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Photographic around 170
thousand
pounds
and France around 165
thousand
pounds
.
while
Italy spent more on toys about 157
thousand
pounds
.
Moreover
, Germany had similar spending on three types of goods (
tennis
racquets
, perfumes, and photographs) exactly 150
thousand
pounds
. The lowest
amount
of spent in France on
tennis
racquets
, and in Germany on both CDs and toys , both about 145
thousand
pounds
.
While
Britain had the lowes in both personal stereos and
tennis
racquets
at 155
thousand
pounds
.
Furthermore
, Italy spent less on personal stereos at 150
thousand
pounds
.
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