The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Spending in Thousand Pound Sterling
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The bar graph illustrates the number of spent on six kinds of goods (photographic film , toys , CDs, perfumes,
tennis
racquets
, and personal stereos) in four nations (Britain, France, Italy, and Germany).
Overall
, Britain has the highest amount
of spending especially
on photographic film goods. Add the comma(s)
, especially
while
German people spend the lowest amount
of spent on CDs.
The highest amount
of spending for different nations , The UK people spent in
Photographic around 170 Change preposition
on
thousand
pounds
and France around 165 thousand
pounds
. while
Italy spent more on toys about 157 thousand
pounds
. Moreover
, Germany had similar spending on three types of goods ( tennis
racquets
, perfumes, and photographs) exactly 150 thousand
pounds
.
The lowest amount
of spent in France on tennis
racquets
, and in Germany on both CDs and toys , both about 145 thousand
pounds
. While
Britain had the lowes in both personal stereos and tennis
racquets
at 155 thousand
pounds
. Furthermore
, Italy spent less on personal stereos at 150 thousand
pounds
.Submitted by saja.alotaibi on
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