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The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Spending in Thousand Pound Sterling

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Spending in Thousand Pound Sterling
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The bar graph illustrates the number of spent on six kinds of goods (photographic film , toys , CDs, perfumes,
tennis
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racquets
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, and personal stereos) in four nations (Britain, France, Italy, and Germany).
Overall
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, Britain has the highest
amount
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 of spending
especially
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, especially
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 on photographic film goods.
while
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 German people spend the lowest
amount
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 of spent on CDs. The highest
amount
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 of spending for different nations , The UK people spent
in
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on
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 Photographic around 170
thousand
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pounds
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 and France around 165
thousand
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pounds
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.
while
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 Italy spent more on toys about 157
thousand
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pounds
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.
Moreover
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, Germany had similar spending on three types of goods (
tennis
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racquets
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 , perfumes, and photographs) exactly 150
thousand
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pounds
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. The lowest
amount
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 of spent in France on
tennis
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racquets
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, and in Germany on both CDs and toys , both about 145
thousand
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pounds
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.
While
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 Britain had the lowes in both personal stereos and
tennis
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racquets
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 at 155
thousand
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pounds
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.
Furthermore
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, Italy spent less on personal stereos at 150
thousand
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pounds
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tennis, racquets, amount, thousand, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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