The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariosns where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariosns where relevant.
The line chart provides key information about how many tourists visited a particular Caribbean
island
between the years 2010 and 2017. The units are measured in Millions of
visitors
.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the total of
visitors
increased during these 7 years.
In addition
, the
number
of tourists who stayed on
cruise
ships
increased rapidly between 2016 and 2017,
whereas
the ones who stayed on the
island
plunged in 2016.
According to
what is shown, in 2010 there were almost 1.5
million
visitors
stayed on the
island
,
while
the ones who stayed on
cruise
ships
were 1
million
less than that.
Moreover
, during the interval 2011-2013, there was a significant soar in the
number
of
visitors
staying on the
island
and reached Its peak with 1.5
million
visitors
.
In contrast
, the figures for tourists staying on
cruise
ships
fluctuated between 0.5 and 0.25
million
visitors
during these years. From 2013 there was a gradual soar in the
number
of
visitors
staying on
cruise
ships
with almost one
million
increasing every year and it reached its peak in 2017 with 2
million
visitors
.The
number
of
visitors
who stayed on the
island
was constant at 1.5
million
visitors
from 2013 to 2015 and it dropped in 2016 and reached a
million
. In terms of the total, there was a gradual increase from 2010 to 2014 with one
million
each year.
Finally
, there was significant growth between 2016 and 2017 with more than 3.5
million
visitors
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, visitors, number, cruise, ships, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "soar" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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