Youre is oh abing friend has asked r yo urternitu college project Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say how important New Year is to people in your country • describe how New Year is celebrated in your country • explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your country
Dear Ali,
I hope you're well. I'm so excited to help you with your project. Am writing
this
letter to give you some information about the New Year celebration in Iran.
When it comes to New Year,it definitely is the most important festival in Iran. This
is not only the symbol of starting the new year but also
part of Iranian civilisation from thousands of years ago.
First of all,family members clean the home and also
they prepare some stuff for the decorating table. In addition
to that they buy some cuckies ,fish and flowers for designing.
Furthermore
,the most fantastic thing that I like about is when the season changes from winter to spring and all the birds again start singing.However
, meeting family and friends and gathering with them made us a memorable night .
I hope this
information will be helpful for your project.please do not hesitate to contact me if you need further
information.
Best regards,
ArmitaSubmitted by armi.zahedi on
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task achievement
Include more specific details about how New Year is celebrated, such as specific customs, foods, and activities.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a single main idea to improve clarity.
task achievement
The letter has a warm and friendly tone, making it suitable for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The closing and greeting are appropriately done, providing a nice structure to the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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