The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The graph gives information about how many
shops
were closed and opened in a particular country from 2011 to 2018.
Over the period shown, the Use synonyms
number
of newly opened Use synonyms
shops
went down dramatically, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
number
of shop closures dropped slightly.
Nearly 8,500 Use synonyms
shops
were opened in 2011, Use synonyms
while
in 2012, there was only half of that Linking Words
number
. Use synonyms
By contrast
, the Linking Words
number
of shutdown Use synonyms
shops
began at around 6,200 in 2011 and went down to less than 6,000 in 2012. In 2013, the Use synonyms
number
of store closures reached a peak at over 7,000. 2015 saw a rapid fall in the Use synonyms
number
of shut-down Use synonyms
shops
from around 6,500 to roughly 500.
From 2015 to 2017, the Use synonyms
number
of newly opened stores remained unchanged at around 4,000Use synonyms
,
and dropped to 3,000 for the next year. Remove the comma
apply
However
, the Linking Words
number
of closed stores soared to more than 5,000 in 2016Use synonyms
,
and Remove the comma
apply
then
fluctuated Linking Words
approximately
5,000 for the next two yearChange preposition
by approximately
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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