The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

The graph gives information about how many

shops

were closed and opened in a particular country from 2011 to 2018. Over the period shown, the

number

of newly opened

shops

went down dramatically,

while

the

number

of shop closures dropped slightly. Nearly 8,500

shops

were opened in 2011,

while

in 2012, there was only half of that

number

.

By contrast

, the

number

of shutdown

shops

began at around 6,200 in 2011 and went down to less than 6,000 in 2012. In 2013, the

number

of store closures reached a peak at over 7,000. 2015 saw a rapid fall in the

number

of shut-down

shops

from around 6,500 to roughly 500. From 2015 to 2017, the

number

of newly opened stores remained unchanged at around 4,000

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and dropped to 3,000 for the next year.

However

, the

number

of closed stores soared to more than 5,000 in 2016

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and

then

fluctuated

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5,000 for the next two year