The charts below show the percentage of people using private cars in five Australian cities between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the number of individuals who were driving
cars
in 5 cities ( Sydney, Use synonyms
Melbourne
, Brisbane, Perth, and Use synonyms
Aldelaid
) in Australia, for ten years ( from 2000 to 2010).
Correct your spelling
Adelaide
Overall
,Linking Words
in
Sydney Change preposition
apply
was
the highest Verb problem
had
percentage
of Use synonyms
people
who were using private Use synonyms
cars
, Use synonyms
while
at the beginning of the period the lowest Linking Words
percentage
of using private motors in Adelaide, and in the Use synonyms
last
year was in Linking Words
Melbourne
.
There was increasing significantly in the Use synonyms
percentage
of Sydney it started at 70% and Use synonyms
then
increased to 90% in 2010. Linking Words
In addition
, in 2000, the number of Linking Words
people
in Perth was 50% Use synonyms
then
it rose to 60% in 2004 and remained the same. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
people
using Use synonyms
cars
in Brisbane increased steadily it started at 40% and increased to 50% in 2020.
On the Use synonyms
otherhand
, the lowest number of Correct your spelling
other hand
people
using Use synonyms
cars
in 2000, was 20% in Aldelaid, Use synonyms
while
in Linking Words
Melbourne
about 30%, Use synonyms
then
it changed in the Linking Words
last
year to the opposite, exactly 30% in Adeliad Linking Words
while
Linking Words
Melbourne
dropped to about 25%.Use synonyms
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