The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.

The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.
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The bar chart shows the estimated
sales
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of
Jeans
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for
two
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companies
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and the pie chart shows the projected
market
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share
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of the
jeans
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market
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next year in Turkey.
Overall
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, as you can see obviously, the estimated
sales
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of
jeans
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by the
two
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companies
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next year in Turkey are similar relatively.
However
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, the estimated
sales
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of
jeans
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have increased dramatically from
June
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to
December
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.
Whereas
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50% proportion of the projected
market
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share
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belongs to just
two
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companies
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. Jack &
Jones
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and
Mango
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have most of the projected
market
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share
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. It seems these
two
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companies
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are very competitive in
Jeans
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. The estimated
sales
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of
jeans
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of
Mango
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from January to
June
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have been increasing slowly. In January there were 150 nearly and in
June
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less than 300. And from
June
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to
December
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has been increased gradually. There were less than 300 in
June
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and in
December
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almost 600.
Whereas
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, the estimated
sales
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of
jeans
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by Jack and
Jones
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from February to July have been increasing steadily. In January there were nearly 250 and in July almost 400. And from July to
December
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has been increased rapidly. In July there were almost 400 and in
December
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more than 900. Jack &
Jones
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and
Mango
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have a 50% proportion of the projected
market
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share
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. But Jack &
Jones
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brand has 30% and
Mango
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brand has 20%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 90%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, jeans, two, companies, market, share, june, december, jones, mango with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • estimated sales
  • projected market share
  • dominant player
  • competition
  • consumer choice
  • pricing strategies
  • market trends
  • marketing campaigns
  • economic conditions
  • fashion trends
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