The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.
The bar chart shows the estimated
sales
of Jeans
for two
companies
and the pie chart shows the projected market
share
of the jeans
market
next year in Turkey.
Overall
, as you can see obviously, the estimated sales
of jeans
by the two
companies
next year in Turkey are similar relatively. However
, the estimated sales
of jeans
have increased dramatically from June
to December
. Whereas
50% proportion of the projected market
share
belongs to just two
companies
. Jack & Jones
and Mango
have most of the projected market
share
. It seems these two
companies
are very competitive in Jeans
.
The estimated sales
of jeans
of Mango
from January to June
have been increasing slowly. In January there were 150 nearly and in June
less than 300. And from June
to December
has been increased gradually. There were less than 300 in June
and in December
almost 600. Whereas
, the estimated sales
of jeans
by Jack and Jones
from February to July have been increasing steadily. In January there were nearly 250 and in July almost 400. And from July to December
has been increased rapidly. In July there were almost 400 and in December
more than 900. Jack & Jones
and Mango
have a 50% proportion of the projected market
share
. But Jack & Jones
brand has 30% and Mango
brand has 20%.Submitted by ryujaekwang0928 on
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