The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.

The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.
The bar chart shows the estimated
sales
of
Jeans
for
two
companies
and the pie chart shows the projected
market
share
of the
jeans
market
next year in Turkey.
Overall
, as you can see obviously, the estimated
sales
of
jeans
by the
two
companies
next year in Turkey are similar relatively.
However
, the estimated
sales
of
jeans
have increased dramatically from
June
to
December
.
Whereas
50% proportion of the projected
market
share
belongs to just
two
companies
. Jack &
Jones
and
Mango
have most of the projected
market
share
. It seems these
two
companies
are very competitive in
Jeans
. The estimated
sales
of
jeans
of
Mango
from January to
June
have been increasing slowly. In January there were 150 nearly and in
June
less than 300. And from
June
to
December
has been increased gradually. There were less than 300 in
June
and in
December
almost 600.
Whereas
, the estimated
sales
of
jeans
by Jack and
Jones
from February to July have been increasing steadily. In January there were nearly 250 and in July almost 400. And from July to
December
has been increased rapidly. In July there were almost 400 and in
December
more than 900. Jack &
Jones
and
Mango
have a 50% proportion of the projected
market
share
. But Jack &
Jones
brand has 30% and
Mango
brand has 20%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, jeans, two, companies, market, share, june, december, jones, mango with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.

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  • estimated sales
  • projected market share
  • dominant player
  • competition
  • consumer choice
  • pricing strategies
  • market trends
  • marketing campaigns
  • economic conditions
  • fashion trends
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