The pie chart shows how people in Edmonton use four different types of transport and the table provided information on five different reasons for using the car.

The pie chart shows how people in Edmonton use four different types of transport and the table provided information on five different reasons for using the car.
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The pie
chart
provides a breakdown by type of transport and car in Edmonton with the table
chart
indicating
whether
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the reason for using the car in
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. As can be seen from the pie
chart
, the kind of transfer varies considerably.
For example
,  the majority (45 per cent )of those in town .The second most commonly used form of transport is the light rail transit which accounts for 35% of the total.
While
not as dominant as cars, LTR still plays a significant role in urban transportation systems.
By contrast
, the profiles for both bus and taxi include roughly equal proportions:10 per cent respectively. It is clear from the table
chart
that Edmonton is rated that people mainly use transportation to commute to work, accounting for 55% of the total,
while
other reasons include shopping (15%) and leisure activities (15%).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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