Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Even though one of the most radical problems needed to be tackled in

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day and age is relevant to the environment, there

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people

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still

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do not pay sufficient attention to

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issue. From my perspective, I totally agree with

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view for several reasons. The main reason why I believe numerous

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not

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enough about environmental issues is because it does not

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adversely to their daily

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life

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at the moment.

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the consequences of damaging the environment do not occur rapidly but it needs a prolonged time to build up and

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has an extremely negative impact on

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is perfectly exemplified in the case of global warming, the development of industrialization releases a large amount of carbon dioxide which brings about

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increase in

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temperature.

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, it results in climate change which makes citizens live in

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and hotter atmosphere. Another reason why I support the notion is

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the fact that individuals put their own convenience as a priority

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of thinking for the community and

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generations.

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people

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throw garbage, especially plastic items, on the beach when they enjoy their

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because they don’t want to waste time looking for a bin.

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, a large number of

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still have a misconception that an individual cannot affect

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the whole ecosystem. In conclusion, I completely agree that numerous

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ignore the impact of environmental issues on their

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life

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because they cannot see obviously the negative effects on their daily

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and they prefer their convenience more than others. Given

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situation, it seems that governments should come up with some solutions to raise

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’s awareness of environmental issues.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

291 words

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