The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.

The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.
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represents
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an
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average household expenditures in an unspecified country in 1950 and 2010, indicated in percentages.
Overall
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, it can be clearly observed that housing accounted for the greatest ratio in 1950,
whereas
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that of expenses of a household spending on food was the largest proportion in 2010
which
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overtaking that of budget for housing in the previous expenses. Starting in 1950, at 72.1%, housing was the highest spending among other types of expenditures, followed by food and education at 11.2%, and 6.6%, respectively.
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, it is interesting to note that other types of expenditures
such
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as health care, transportation and others reserved less than 5%. Six decades later, at 34%, food
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accounted for the greatest ratio among others in 2010, followed by housing and others, at 22%, and 19.2%, respectively.
Budget
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The budget
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for transportation and healthcare increased about 4 fold and 2 fold of its previous figures
accordingly
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,
while
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that of education slightly
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0.3%.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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