The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart demonstrates the profiles of Anthropology graduates of a university after the course completion
whereas
the table illustrates the incomes of the anthropologists,with an experience of five years,employed in various sectors
Overall
, it is clear that
,
about half of the degree holders preferred full-time Remove the comma
apply
job
over other opportunities. Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
However
, the majority of the anthropologists with highest
Correct article usage
the highest
salary
package were working in the public sector.
After finishing their undergraduation
course, about 52%of the graduates chose to work as a full-time employee, Correct your spelling
undergraduate
whereas
15% preferred part-time work, 1/3rd of which continued on their post-graduation studies besides
working in
part-time. Change preposition
apply
However
, about 8% , were on full-time post graduation
studies. The unemployed Add a hyphen
post-graduation
grduates
Correct your spelling
graduates
accounts
for about 12%, Correct subject-verb agreement
account
in contrast
, the rest of the graduates' work remained unkonwn
.
Anthropologists were working as freelance consultants and Correct your spelling
unknown
also
employed in both public and private divisions. After an experience of five years
their salaries vary.About 5% of the financial consultants and Add a comma
years,
the
government job holders made an income ranging from $25,000 to $49,999. Correct article usage
apply
However
, they were tripled for a salary
of about $50,000 to $74,999. Feelancers
taking the next two Correct your spelling
Freelancers
category
of salaries are identical in proportion. Change to a plural noun
categories
In contrast
, about 30% and 50% of public servants are paid with $75,000-$99,999 and above $100,000 respectively. Furthermore
, the private employees receiving the starting salary
range were
double Correct subject-verb agreement
was
to
that of the other two divisions but workers with Change preposition
apply
highest
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the highest
salary
package were least in this
sector when compared to the other two.Submitted by sivaleelamahendra1214 on
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