The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014
The line graph illustrates the average change of the costs through the months of
three
substances in 2014.
In general, nickel
tends to decline over time compared to copper
and zinc
, and these three
metals bottomed out in June.
Having looked at the given picture for details, in January, nickel
and copper
were at 6% and 2% before going down by 5% and nearly 0.5%, respectively in March. Meanwhile, zinc
witnessed an increase from 1% to 3% then
slightly dropping in the same month. In April, both nickel
and copper
remained steady while
zinc
fell. Three
percentages of three
substances continued to fall and reached the lowest rate in June.
In contrast
, begin the end of June, three
expenses of copper
, nickel
, and zinc
went up and levelled off at 1%, -1%, and -0.5%, respectively. After that, three
percentages slightly decreased before increasing and reached the final rate at the end
of the year. Among that, the figure for zinc
in December was more than in January by 1%. By contrast
, the nickel
's rate had a significant decrease to 1%, and copper
's proportion witnessed a slight drop of approximately 0.2%.Submitted by ieltswritingpracticedl on
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