The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014
The line graph illustrates the average change of the costs through the months of
three
substances in 2014.
In general, Use synonyms
nickel
tends to decline over time compared to Use synonyms
copper
and Use synonyms
zinc
, and these Use synonyms
three
metals bottomed out in June.
Having looked at the given picture for details, in January, Use synonyms
nickel
and Use synonyms
copper
were at 6% and 2% before going down by 5% and nearly 0.5%, respectively in March. Meanwhile, Use synonyms
zinc
witnessed an increase from 1% to 3% Use synonyms
then
slightly dropping in the same month. In April, both Linking Words
nickel
and Use synonyms
copper
remained steady Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
zinc
fell. Use synonyms
Three
percentages of Use synonyms
three
substances continued to fall and reached the lowest rate in June.
Use synonyms
In contrast
, begin the end of June, Linking Words
three
expenses of Use synonyms
copper
, Use synonyms
nickel
, and Use synonyms
zinc
went up and levelled off at 1%, -1%, and -0.5%, respectively. After that, Use synonyms
three
percentages slightly decreased before increasing and reached the final rate Use synonyms
at the end
of the year. Among that, the figure for Linking Words
zinc
in December was more than in January by 1%. Use synonyms
By contrast
, the Linking Words
nickel
's rate had a significant decrease to 1%, and Use synonyms
copper
's proportion witnessed a slight drop of approximately 0.2%.Use synonyms
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