The graph below gives information about international tourist arrival in different parts of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about international tourist arrival in different parts of the world.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided line chart gives information about the total amount of travellers who visited five parts of the world during the given period. Looking from an
overall
perspective,
it is clear that
the total percentage of travelling among tourists increased noticeably, meanwhile, North
America
took the highest number. Diving deeper, North
America
and Central and Eastern Europe showed a dramatic growth
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tourism, regarding the graph, in 1990, the Central and Eastern
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Eroup
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Europe
stood at 30%
then
the rates went up during the following years to reach nearly 90%
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of 2005. At the same time, North
America
was the only country that reached a peak of 90% in 2002, after that it had a slight decrease.
On the contrary
, the other three parts; South-East Asia, Sub-Saharan Africa, and South
America
noticed a slight increase.
Moreover
, both Sub-Saharan Africa and South
America
started the period with about 10% and
growed
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up to approximately 20% and 18% respectively.
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