The graph below gives information about international tourist arrival in different parts of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided line chart gives information about the total amount of travellers who visited five parts of the world during the given period. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is clear that
the total percentage of travelling among tourists increased noticeably, meanwhile, North America
took the highest number.
Diving deeper, North America
and Central and Eastern Europe showed a dramatic growth of
tourism, regarding the graph, in 1990, the Central and Eastern Change preposition
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of
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stood at 30% Correct your spelling
Europe
then
the rates went up during the following years to reach nearly 90% with
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at
end
of 2005. At the same time, North Add an article
the end
America
was the only country that reached a peak of 90% in 2002, after that it had a slight decrease.
On the contrary
, the other three parts; South-East Asia, Sub-Saharan Africa, and South America
noticed a slight increase. Moreover
, both Sub-Saharan Africa and South America
started the period with about 10% and growed
up to approximately 20% and 18% respectively.Correct your spelling
grew
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