The bar chart below shows social media use in Americans aged 12-24 between 2014 and 2015.

The bar chart below shows social media use in Americans aged 12-24 between 2014 and 2015.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below shows social media use in Americans aged 12-24 between 2014 and 2015.
The bar chart gives information about the changes in social
media
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for Americans aged 12-24 from 2014 to 2015.
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, it can be seen that three of the social
media
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platforms declined in terms of their usage,
while
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two of the sites rose during the period. The biggest change is in the number of people using Tumblr, which plummeted from 22 % of 12 -
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to just 15 %.
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Facebook declined by a similar amount, it still holds the position of the most popular social
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site
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. The final
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to show a fall in
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of users from
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demographic was Twitter. Here the fall was less dramatic, with the percentage dipped by just 4%.
In contrast
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, the number of users on Instagram and Snapchat rose during
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time period.
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Instagram went up steadily from 53 % to 59%. Snapchat soared by 11% from 46% to 57%, nearly overtaking Instagram as the second most popular social
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site
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. The final
site
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shown in the bar chart, Vine, remains
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flat
during
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time period.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words media, site with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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