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The Pie charts below compare household spending in the UK in 1980 with predictions for 2030.

The Pie charts below compare household spending in the UK in 1980 with predictions for 2030.
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The two pie charts illustrate the expected changes in household expenditure in 2030 compared to 1980.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the two most notable (заметный)changes are the fall in the cost of food and drink,
however
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, the increase in housing costs. In 1980, food and drink accounted for 25% of the household budget,
whereas
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 it is forecast (прогноз)to only make up 14% by 2030. Clothing and footwear and recreation and culture are projected to fall slightly, just by 3% during the period of time.
In contrast
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, the costs of three categories are predicted to rise but housing is expected to rise much more than any other. The cost of housing is predicted to nearly double by 2030 to 38% of household spending. Spending on transport is anticipated (ожидаемый)to increase by 2%,
also
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 the amount spent on electricity, gas and water is projected to be the smallest change just
increase
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 by 1%.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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