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The chart below gives information about levels of education by age range in Glasgow in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about levels of education by age range in Glasgow in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows the different
age
 ranges of
population's
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the population's
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 educational level (
University
 degree,
school
 certificate, no qualifications) in Glasgow in 2010,
while
 the two pie charts illustrate the same information depending on gender in the same year. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall
, from 16 to 50, the ages of
people
's proportion of levels of education are almost similar.
However
, as it gets older, the academic level is starting to decrease. In terms of the ages of 16-24 and 35-50, they are demonstrating exactly the same rate in all categories. Even the not-qualified individuals' proportion was alike, which was 9 % in the
age
 between 16 and 50, 24-35
age
 range of
people
 with
university
 degrees was higher by 5 %. Of the
age
 range of 50 to 75, half of the
people
 have
university
 degrees, 20 % have
school
 certificates and the rest weren't qualified with any education. When it comes to the
age
 range of 75 or above, only 3 % have a
school
 certificate and
people
 who have no educational background dramatically increased to 72 %.
Moreover
, only one-fourth have a
university
 degree. Genders were nearly similar and the
school
 certificate percentages were equivalent (33 %). But men's
university
 degree rate was slightly higher than women's (32 % and 29 % respectively).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, university, school, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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