The chart below gives information about levels of education by age range in Glasgow in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about levels of education by age range in Glasgow in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the different
age
ranges of
population's
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the population's
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educational level (
University
degree,
school
certificate, no qualifications) in Glasgow in 2010,
while
the two pie charts illustrate the same information depending on gender in the same year. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall
, from 16 to 50, the ages of
people
's proportion of levels of education are almost similar.
However
, as it gets older, the academic level is starting to decrease. In terms of the ages of 16-24 and 35-50, they are demonstrating exactly the same rate in all categories. Even the not-qualified individuals' proportion was alike, which was 9 % in the
age
between 16 and 50, 24-35
age
range of
people
with
university
degrees was higher by 5 %. Of the
age
range of 50 to 75, half of the
people
have
university
degrees, 20 % have
school
certificates and the rest weren't qualified with any education. When it comes to the
age
range of 75 or above, only 3 % have a
school
certificate and
people
who have no educational background dramatically increased to 72 %.
Moreover
, only one-fourth have a
university
degree. Genders were nearly similar and the
school
certificate percentages were equivalent (33 %). But men's
university
degree rate was slightly higher than women's (32 % and 29 % respectively).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, university, school, people with synonyms.
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