You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter • offer to make a popular dish from your country • describe what this dish is • explain why it should be included in the event

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Dear Luis, I am writing to you

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say a huge thanks for

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a food event in our student club. It is very important for members because you help to as back to our traditional meal from our home. In terms of me, I would appreciate it if you set up a famous dish from my nationality for our event.

This

is a type of snack and we call it Salo. We can eat

this

snack because that one dish can easily be cooked and served on a table at an entry site. It is a slow-cook pork fet, prepared in a saltwater marinade with a tiny skean.

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, before present for you

this

type of dish, I checked our menu and could not find many entries for an event.

That is

why I describe our snack and I think it has to diverse menu. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Kind regards, Nick

Submitted by vladislavikonnikov112 on Fri Jul 19 2024

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task achievement

Try to elaborate a bit more on your reasons and explanation to create a stronger argument for including the dish. For instance, consider mentioning some cultural significance or unique aspect of Salo that will appeal to the attendees.

coherence cohesion

Make sure each paragraph contains a single main idea. This will make your writing clearer and easier to follow.

coherence cohesion

Avoid minor grammatical errors for a smoother flow. For example, 'I would appreciate it if you set up a famous dish' could be 'I would appreciate it if you could include a famous dish from my country.'

task achievement

Your letter mostly sticks to a suitable formal tone which fits the context of writing to an event organizer.

coherence cohesion

You have effectively organized your letter using proper openings and closings, helping to maintain clear communication.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

157 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Enthusiastic
Contribution
Cuisine
Traditional
Ingredients
Preparation
Cultural significance
Celebrate
Diversity
Culinary traditions
National dish
Occasion
Unique attributes
Preparation method
Gourmet
Authentic
Flavorful
Recipe
Event arrangements
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