You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter • offer to make a popular dish from your country • describe what this dish is • explain why it should be included in the event
Dear Luis,
I am writing to you
for
say a huge thanks for Change preposition
to
organise
a food event in our student club. It is very important for members because you help to as back to our traditional meal from our home.
In terms of me, I would appreciate it if you set up a famous dish from my nationality for our event. Change the verb form
organising
This
is a type of snack and we call it Salo. We can eat this
snack because that one dish can easily be cooked and served on a table at an entry site. It is a slow-cook pork fet, prepared in a saltwater marinade with a tiny skean.
Additionally
, before present for you this
type of dish, I checked our menu and could not find many entries for an event. That is
why I describe our snack and I think it has to diverse menu.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Kind regards,
NickSubmitted by vladislavikonnikov112 on
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task achievement
Try to elaborate a bit more on your reasons and explanation to create a stronger argument for including the dish. For instance, consider mentioning some cultural significance or unique aspect of Salo that will appeal to the attendees.
coherence cohesion
Make sure each paragraph contains a single main idea. This will make your writing clearer and easier to follow.
coherence cohesion
Avoid minor grammatical errors for a smoother flow. For example, 'I would appreciate it if you set up a famous dish' could be 'I would appreciate it if you could include a famous dish from my country.'
task achievement
Your letter mostly sticks to a suitable formal tone which fits the context of writing to an event organizer.
coherence cohesion
You have effectively organized your letter using proper openings and closings, helping to maintain clear communication.