The graph shows population variation in three wildlife species from 2011 to 2016 in North America and its coastal areas.

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The given chart compares how the

population

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of three wildlife species vary over a period of four years both in America and in coastal areas.

It is clear that

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bears were by far the highest number over the period shown,

while

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Whales

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were the lowest number

especially

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, especially

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in 2016. In 2011,

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the bear's

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bear's

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bears'

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population

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was close to 2

thousadan

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thousand

, gaining the least

population

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Whales

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and dolphins experience approximately 60 and 150 respectively. Just one year later, both

Whales

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and Bears

increasd

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increased

, and the figures for those dramatically rose to nearly 90 and 100 thousand. Between 2013 and 2016, bears continued to increase and the number of bears received to close to 200 thousand. Both

Whales

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and dolphins decreased

While

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the

Whales

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remain relatively stable, at between 55 and 100,

wildlife

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the wildlife

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population

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for dolphins gained a

dramatically

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dramatic

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decread

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decrease

in 2014, and after that, it had a negligible amount in the years of 2014,2015 and 2016.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, whales with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

152 words

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The graph shows population variation in three wildlife species from 2011 to 2016 in North America and its coastal areas.

Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries is a positive development, while others think that many countries will lose their national identities as a result. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

University students often focus on one subject. However, some people think that universities should encourage students to learn a range of other subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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