The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature. and make the comparison where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the manufacture of black

tea

with two diverse techniques namely traditional and modern.

Firstly

, before starting the steps, the farmers will

picking

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fresh

tea

leaves from the garden, but only the bud and 2 top leaves

picked

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to make a quality

tea

.

Secondly

, the withering process, where the leaves are dried

while

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with

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remaining

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the remaining

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40% moisture before

proceed

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to the following stage.

Next,

when using

traditional

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the traditional

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method, the leaves will be rolled flat and broken until the enzymes are released.

In contrast

, the modern formula uses

machine

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a machine

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to cut the leaves into

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smaller pieces.

After

this

, oxidation or fermentation occurs

whereas

the leaves are laid out on tiles and eventually change to copper colour before putting it in the oven to dry out the moisture with only 3% moisture intact in the

last

process.

Not to mention

, the flavour and aroma were released during the process.

Overall

, there are 5 stages in order to make a good

tea

whether in

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traditional or modern ways.

However

, both are

efficients

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efficient

and

effectives

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effective

effectiveness

.