You have just returned from a long holiday. While you were away, your friend looked after your house. Write a letter to you friend. In your letter - thank you friend for the things she/he did for you - offer to reimburse any money she/he spent on doing these things - arrange to meet your friend for a coffee late this week.
Dear Jane.
Finally
, I'm back! I can't thank you enough for watching over my house and properties while
I was away. It must have been very tasking but you came through, and I sincerely appreciate every bit of it.
Although
, I knew you did this
for me out of kindness, however
, I would love to reimburse you for any expenses you must have incurred while
safe guarding
the house. Correct your spelling
safeguarding
Moreover
, I found out that you bought soaps to clean the windows and dishes, and I genuinely would love to compensate you for everything.
Anyway, now that I am free, I would love it if we could have a dinner hangout over the weekend and maybe from there we could go to the cinema as well. I have made reservations at the newly built restaurant in the city centre for this
Saturday by 8pm and I will take care of the whole expenses. Meanwhile, I would appreciate it if you could come with your daughter so that we could both share a beautiful memory together with
her.
I can't wait to see you again.
Warm wishes,
Moses.Submitted by peteromisakin on
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coherence
Consider breaking longer sentences into shorter ones to improve readability.
coherence
Ensure each paragraph contains a single clear idea to enhance clarity.
task achievement
The letter effectively responds to all parts of the task with a clear and suitable tone.
coherence cohesion
The opening and closing of the letter are appropriately structured and courteous.
coherence cohesion
The writing maintains logical structure and flow, making it easy to follow.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite