It must be a woman who stays at home to care for children. Men are not suited to this kind of work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

There is a statement that

women

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are more

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suitable

to look

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for looking

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after their

kids

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apply

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than

men

. I firmly disagree with

this

notion and I feel that for several reasons .

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essay will

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and

explains

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theses

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reasons. First and foremost, many studies have proven that

men

are better than

women

for

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staying

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and

take

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taking

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care

of children.

For instance

, when I was a kid, my father

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care

of me and my siblings

while

my mother was giving birth

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my

yougest

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youngest

brother. To illustrate

this

, my father

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having patience and kindness

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than my mother.

Furthermore

, many families tend to accept male

babysitter

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more than

female

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females

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due to

their kindness and

concentrate

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.

Thus

,

man

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men

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are suited to

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commit

for

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this

type of work. Surprisingly, many

men

are more

welling

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willing

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than

women

to stay at

home

with their

kids

without complaining and they show ability and capability for

achieveing

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achieving

home

chores, cooking and

care

of children.

However

we

acknwoledge

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acknowledge

that moms have crucial roles in order

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take

care

and

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raise

kids

, fathers

also

have

acomplished

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accomplished

these tasks perfectly.

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, any

of

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parents can stay at

home

and

looking

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after their

kids

, But I

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believe

that fathers

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are more

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capable than mothers.

To conclude

,

men

and

women

have various abilities to stay

home

and

care

of

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children, but

men

characterised

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are characterised

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by many aspects to do

this

.