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The bar chart shows the level of air pollution in five different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the level of air pollution in five different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart above provides statistics about how the polluted
air
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 degree varied across 5 different countries.
Overall
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, the USA has the highest
level
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 of atmospheric contamination,
while
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 New Zealand has the lowest. The rest of the countries are the UK, Austria and Australia, with the
level
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 of
air
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 quality degradation ranging from 35
million
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tonnes
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 to 40
million
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 metric
tonnes
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. The USA holds the first place in
this
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 diagram with a soaring
level
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 of pollution of 80
million
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tonnes
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, which is a gap of 50
million
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tonnes
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 more than New Zealand, the country with the least polluted
air
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, at 30
million
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tonnes
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. The UK and Austria have the same
level
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 of pollution at 40
million
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 metric
tonnes
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, which is 40
million
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tonnes
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 less than the country with the most polluted
air
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, leaving Australia with approximately 35
million
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tonnes
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, only roughly 5
million
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 metric tons more than New Zealand, the country with the cleanest
air
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 regarding
this
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 bar graph.
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