The bar chart shows the level of air pollution in five different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the level of air pollution in five different countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart above provides statistics about how the polluted
air
degree varied across 5 different countries.
Overall
, the USA has the highest
level
of atmospheric contamination,
while
New Zealand has the lowest. The rest of the countries are the UK, Austria and Australia, with the
level
of
air
quality degradation ranging from 35
million
tonnes
to 40
million
metric
tonnes
. The USA holds the first place in
this
diagram with a soaring
level
of pollution of 80
million
tonnes
, which is a gap of 50
million
tonnes
more than New Zealand, the country with the least polluted
air
, at 30
million
tonnes
. The UK and Austria have the same
level
of pollution at 40
million
metric
tonnes
, which is 40
million
tonnes
less than the country with the most polluted
air
, leaving Australia with approximately 35
million
tonnes
, only roughly 5
million
metric tons more than New Zealand, the country with the cleanest
air
regarding
this
bar graph.
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