The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018
The
linge
Correct your spelling
line
graph
represents Use synonyms
quantity
of Add an article
the quantity
a quantity
shops
which Use synonyms
was
closed and opened in Correct subject-verb agreement
were
same
country from 2011 to 2018.
As can be seen from the Change the article
the same
graph
number of shop closures and openings between 2011-2018.
In 2011 Use synonyms
new
opened Change the adjective
newly
shops
had the highest Use synonyms
point
in the Use synonyms
graph
and reached the lowest Use synonyms
point
in 2018,Use synonyms
However
closures Linking Words
shops
same Use synonyms
with
opened Change preposition
as
shops
in 2011 had the highest Use synonyms
point
in 2011 Use synonyms
also
in 2015 it reached the lowest Linking Words
point
in the Use synonyms
graph
.
At the beginning of Use synonyms
the
2011 Correct article usage
apply
new
opened Change the word
newly
shops
had started with about 8500 and it had Use synonyms
big
decrease and stopped Add an article
a big
with
4000, in 2012 after Change preposition
at
that
it got Add a comma
that,
good
increase in 2014 with approximately 6100 Add an article
a good
shops
.Use synonyms
During
2014 to 2015 amount of Change preposition
From
shops
dropped to 4000 and stayed Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
at
same
degree but in 2017 it had Change the article
the same
very
short stature Correct article usage
a very
4100
Change preposition
of 4100
shops
.Use synonyms
Linking Words
Finally
in 2018 it Add a comma
Finally,
hag
slightly Correct your spelling
had
decrease
and stopped with 3000 Wrong verb form
decreased
shops
.
Amount of closed Use synonyms
shops
was about 6500 in 2011 so in 2012 it had Use synonyms
steady
decrease and had 6000 Add an article
a steady
shops
.Afterwards, in 2013 it had little growth and Use synonyms
stoped
just about 7100 Correct your spelling
stopped
shops
.Use synonyms
In contrast
after Linking Words
growth
it had Add a comma
growth,
enormous
decline until 2015 and stopped somewhere Correct article usage
an enormous
about
500 Change preposition
around
shops
.After Use synonyms
that
it got Add a comma
that,
gradual
increase which Correct article usage
a gradual
return
it to Wrong verb form
returned
his
mean and after Correct pronoun usage
its
that
it Add a comma
that,
flactuated
around 5000 Correct your spelling
fluctuated
fluctuates
shops
between 2016-2018Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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