The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.
The tables illustrate data
of
the temperatures and times of sunrise and Change preposition
on
sunset
in two cities ( London
and Sydney
) in
similar weekend days in Change preposition
on
December
2018.
Overall
, the temperature
in Sydney
was the highest, and their sunrise time
was earlier than London
, while
sunset
time
in London
was earlier than Sydney
and their weather was colder than Sydney
.
In London
, which had lower level
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levels
temperature
than Sydney
. the highest number of
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the
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temperature
was 13 C degree
and the lowest was 3 C Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
degree
on Saturday 29th of Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
December
. In addition
, time
of daylight at around 8:00 A.M. sunrise, and at about 15:00 P.M. Correct article usage
the time
sunset
.
In sydney
, the highest degree
of the temperature
was 31 on Sunday 30th of December
2018, while
the lowest degree
was 17 on 28th of December
. Moreover
, The sun rises at 5:45 and increaesed to 5:46, and sunset
time
around 20:06 P.M. .Submitted by saja.alotaibi on
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