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The table below provides statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below provides statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates figures on several major metro (MRT) systems globally. The units of measurement are given in
millions
 and the
length
in
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is in
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kilometres
Overall
, London had the longest coverage
while
 Tokyo had the largest carrying
capacity
 despite
of
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apply
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it having a
less
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shorter
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length
.
Nonetheless
, Kyoto had
a
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the
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 same figure in both
length
 and carrying
capacity
.
Firstly
, the fact that London had the longest train
systems
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system
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 in 1863 with 1100
kilometres
, Tokyo led with carriage in 1904 as it had 1434
millions
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million
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capacity
 and a
length
 of 149
kilometres
.
On the other hand
, Kyoto had the lowest figures as far as
length
 and carrying
capacity
 was concerned in the year 1980 as it covered 11
kilometres
 and carrying
capacity
 was 11
millions
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million
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. Paris and Los
angeles
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Angeles
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 had a rise in the number of
length
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lengths
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.
That is
, in 1890 594km was covered and carrying 850millions and
Los
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in Los
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angeles
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Angeles
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 14km carrying 90
millions
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million
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 in the year 2001.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words millions, length, kilometres, capacity with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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